Thursday, December 20, 2007

The Crazy Ice cream!

. Yesterday I went to the ice ceam shop I as done with my ice-cream. Then I saw bright light and then I saw MORE ICE-CREAM! I got so scared!I yelled so loud. And the whole city heard me at the ice-cream shop. And every one came to the ice-cream shop and saw what I saw!!!!!! And they yelled !!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAA! Then I threw my ice-cream.But every one had some ice-cream because more ice-cream pop out. I said.What? And I say what crazy ice-cream. If this happens to you. You will not love it. You will scream your head off! And don't say
I didn't worn you and don't yell yuor head off.I told it my freiend Lucie.But she yelld.And I got
sent to Mr.Green.But he also yelled until they saw what I saw.So I told them to go to the ice-cream shop and then they saw what I saw! And it olared all over!But they couldn't fall asleep for a year so I ended up as a teacher!So was super glad!And was called Mrs.Madi!And I am only 8 years old!!!!!!!!! But you know life now!!!!!!!!!!!!!

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

you did a good job but you have some errors,but other then that you did a fantastic job.

Anonymous said...

awsome

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