Sunday, December 16, 2007

Garden of Wishes

I go to sleep. My eyes are closed. Then, I said a wish in my dream. The sparkling sun, brought me to the Garden of Wishes. The sparkling sun, brought me to the Garden of Wishes. The gates twinkled in the sunlight. The gates opened to colorful flowers that shined. All of a sudden, I hear my wish go inside a bluebonnet flower. I rush to it in wonder. Then all at once, an angel comes. "This is the Garden of Wishes."says the angel. "We keep wishes in the flowers to remember them for a lifetime." The angel leaves me. I slowly wake up. I see a blurry, peach hand waving at me. It is my mother. I jump up and hug her with glad tears. I am happy to see her.

3 comments:

miss t said...

What a beautiful dream! I loved how you didn't give a long list of events and that you really focused on one moment! Way to use those binoculars to zoom in on the details! Keep it up!

Anonymous said...

I love the description in your story. It helped me feel what the character was feeling. I'm impressed!!!

Jacquie said...

I felt like I was taken to the place in your dream. What wondering describing words. I love this!