Wednesday, January 30, 2008

The Dragon's Dungeon #3

The skeleton guards caught me and threw me back int the dungeon.

While in the dungeon I noticed somthing, it seemed as if the dragon was trying to get my attention. "Finally your back here. I need your help, Jack. Oh no he passed out, they always do when I ask for help."

After I awoke I thought Was it a dream? Nope it couldn't be I'm not that crazy...yet. "Yes I am a talking dragon, but I need your help so you need to stop passing out, O.K.?" "I'll help you. What do you need." "Two things. To beat the Dragon King and a way out of this place." "Sure" "My names Ares." Said the talking dragon named Ares
Ares melted the silver chains off our cages with a blast of flames. "I found the exit panel, Ares." "Hop on my back Jack." "Ok. Forward Ares tonight we ride!" Off into thr thrown room, out the window, and into the night. About a week later the king sent out a party of skeletons to find Ares and Jack, but they never found them.
Ares and Jack split up and went seprate ways, but Jack spent 1 whole year looking for Ares. Ares thought they should make an army of dragons and people. As Ares sopke Jack decided to try to get the town to help him in his quest to defeat the Dragon King. Ares thought to get all of his budies for high school to help. They split and went off to the army for invasion of the thrown castle.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

wow thats so cool i like all the action in your stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

Great dialogue!

karhun said...

great imaginatoin. for advice check over work

kenmil said...

Good thinking I like your creativity and your imagination! That was a great story that you wrote. I loved it. And you had very good personality in your work. And just make sure to look over what you write so you know that it makes sense in your story just for advice dont take personally!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well great story! PEACE! keep up the hard work!

Anonymous said...

Ladies and gentle men i give you The Dragon's Dungeon #.......4 and 5

Super magic pie man #s 1-3 or 1-4

and The Future (unfinished)