It all started after Zach's birthday party.Zachary Willis was my friend until after his tenth birthday.After his party had ended he begin to think he was so special, so he started bossing people around.Nobody wanted to do what he told them to do and that was when the trouble started.He was so mad that smoke started coming out of his ear [trust me he looked like he was about to EXPLODE when he found out].He had locked himself in his room for 10 days,he wouldn't let his parents go in his room to give him food so he created 20 auto- bots to feed him, clean his room, and many other things.That was when the idea struck him, he could use the auto-bots to get what he wanted!The next 5 days he was busy making auto-bots for his "BIG PLAN".After 120 hours of work Zach finally finished his project.Zach hoped his plan would work, but unfortunately he was wrong it wasn't going to be the way he had planned it in fact he was almost going to destroy the earth.He jogged his way over to Max's Ice-cream Store, and asked for a banana split sundae.He gobbled his ice-cream so fast it was a blur[he finished it in 1 minute that's a record].Then he had the nerve to walk out without paying, Max got so angry he ran after Zach as fast as he could.When he finally caught up with
Zach he tackled him to the floor and then pinned him so he couldn't escape.Max told Zach to hand over $5.00 he hesitated at first which made Max furious he was about to reach into the younger kid's pocket when Zach showed him his auto-bots their sight made the older faint.When Max woke up[ which was about 15 minutes after he became unconscious] he looked around and saw that Zach was gone he growled at the thought of the kid.Meanwhile the same thing had happened to many other shop owners they had all contacted the police when they awoke, the police were on Zach's tail!Police officers from all over the world were being warned about Zach and his army of auto-bots, posters were everywhere.When Zach heard about what was happening he fled to Springfield, Illinois, but he was caught on the way there and jailed.Eventually his auto-bots found a way to bust him out, and they were on the move again.When Zach finally reached Springfield they must have known he was coming because they had a trap set for him.When Zach was leaning against a tree trunk when a 60 year old man sat next to him''hungry''said the stranger ''yes''Zach replied.The stranger led the young boy to a restaurant on the way there Zach fell in a 20 feet deep hole the stranger then contacted the police.When the police arrived they waited at the entrance of the hole just as they expected Zach's auto-bots brought him to the top of the hole.The auto-bots fired a missile at the police luckily many of the police cars avoided being hit, but two were shot.Then the auto-bots created a ray gun so fast it was a blur ''this ray gun can destroy anything''they announced.They took a careful aim and tried to hit the chief, but he ducked so instead it went straight for a lady with a mirror tucked underneath her arms.She saw the beam, and cried out in terror she raised her mirror as if to shield herself it bounced off the mirror, and went right at the auto-bots.They tried to escape but it was no use they were destroyed in the blink of an eye.It took a while to get over what they just saw, but when they did the police took the boy and were on their way.
TO BE CONTINUED
Saturday, January 19, 2008
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4 comments:
I love your voice in this story! It's great and full of all those SMAPHO details we know and love! Keep it up! I'll try and figure out what happened to the rest of it!
Awesome detailed story. It keep me interested and my eyes were moving so fast because I was excited to see what would happen next. Keep up the excitement in your writings.
WOW great story
Wow great job you had alot of voice in your story! I sure could tell you new what you were talking about!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well great job! PEACE!
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