"I really, really, really gotta go to the bathroom," I bellowed loudly. We had been going in circles for what seemed like hours trying to get to to the Cowboys game. It would be my very first professional football game, if we ever got there!
My friends and I seemed to be lost trying to locate a parking spot. The spots close to the stadium were crammed and our tickets wouldn't let us park anywhere but the Blue Lot. Jeremy, Barbie, and Papa Bell had really excellent seats so we dashed quickly to get inside. "There's one!" we all shouted in unison.
I was terrified we were going to miss kickoff after the major traffic jam. When we got to the ticket stands, there were tons of people clumped together. My favorite part of the game is kickoff, so I started freaking out that we would miss it. We quickly found the shortest line and started moving like snails.
After the longest line ever, we FINALLY made it to our seats. My brain felt all loopy as I almost fainted at the sight of it all! The field was ginormous and there were like a million people everywhere. Dallas Cowboys jerseys surrounded me.
We made it just in time to see my favorite team soar out of the tunnel and just like that the game began. Jeremy and Barbie never looked behind them to see how excited I was. They could hear me. I was so excited to be there. I yelled, I booed, I said, "GO COWBOYS!" We had thought the Rams were pretty good, but they didn't stand a chance that day.
I learned that the crazy trip was worth the wait and now I'm a Dallas Cowboys fan forever. Next time, though, I'm going to go to the bathroom before I leave the house.
by: jacgol
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Wow, that's the best story ever written by Jack Golding, I can tell he took his time and picked a subject that he really loved. As much as I like the Cowboys I think my cheer is "GO JACK"
Jack,
I really enjoyed reading your story but I think you should really consider becoming a Tampa Bay Buccaneer fan, like your Uncle Mark. (Joking)
Lines are certainly long when you go to watch a team as famous as your Dallas Cowboys. Glad you got to your seat in time for the game. So, did mummy and daddy make sure you got a hotdog and coke?
The football season is half over but your Cowboys are going to have to find a quarterback since Tony is injured.
Have a wonderful week and keep writing those great stories.
All the best, Love Uncle Mark
Jack,
I really enjoyed reading your story but I think you should really consider becoming a Tampa Bay Buccaneer fan, like your Uncle Mark. (Joking)
Lines are certainly long when you go to watch a team as famous as your Dallas Cowboys. Glad you got to your seat in time for the game. So, did mummy and daddy make sure you got a hotdog and coke?
The football season is half over but your Cowboys are going to have to find a quarterback since Tony is injured.
Have a wonderful week and keep writing those great stories.
All the best, Love Uncle Mark
Way to go Jack, so glad you remember your first Cowboy game in such detail. I am really proud you are learning to write such awesome stories with Miss T.I look forward to your next and lets hope we meet Romo after he wins the Superbowl this seasons.
1 2 3 Touchdown - Jack
Well, Jack, that story was awesome. I felt like I was right there with you in the excitement of the game! Excellent details! Loved it, loved it, loved it! Keep on writing!!
Jack, Thanks for the very entertaining story. I really loved reading about how much fun you had at the football game, but I wish I could have been there!!! Keep up the great work. Go Cowboys!!
Jack,
I was so thrilled to read such a cool story - and jealous, as I have never been to a Cowboys game. You make me want to go to one now. You used such awesome descriptive words - made me feel your excitement. Keep working hard - you are a talented writer.
Mrs. Grubb
WOW! That was a great story. The story would have been even better if that were Heinz Field in Pittsburgh.. :) Just kidding, I look forward to reading many more exciting stories from you! Mr. Davis
What a great story! I was wondering through the whole thing if you ever got to go to the bathroom or not! I am a Cowboys fan too but unfortunately I have never been to a game! Maybe someday, I will tell you all about it just like you did for us! Keep up the great writing!
Mrs. Minix
Dear Jack,
Jack that was the best story I'v read. I loved the title. " GO COWWBOYS"
Your Friend,
Jordan Forister
Jack that's an awesome story. We sure had a great time, didn't we? You forgot to mention your favorite part of that day...the Dallas Cowboy's chearleeders. Great story...I can't wait to get out there and throw the football later this week, so you can train to be the next Tony..... Romo.....!
Well done Jack! What a fantastic story. We all look forward to reading some more one day! Keep up the good work, miss you lots,
lots of love Auntie Jo, Uncle Keith, Katie, Megan, James and of course, Nanny. XXXXXXX
Jack,
What a great story! I could feel your excitement and the urgency of needing to go to the bathroom. What a great writer you have become. Thanks for sharing!
Nurse Lori
Jack,
That was an amazing story. I actually felt like I was at the Dallas Cowboy game with you. In fact, next time you go I think you should invite me. I am also glad to know that you are now a Cowboys fan. I am too. Keep writing. I want to read more about your adventures.
that was amazing.
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