If i were in charge of the world, I'd cancel taco bell,unhealthy food, BOYS,broccoli.
If i were in charge of the world,there'd be boys for slaves, no dogs dieing and icecream Sundays.
If i were in charge of the world you wouldn't have homework on weekends,comercials or bees.You wouldn't even have spiders all over your house.
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melmer, i'm not trying to be mean, but there are some spelling mistakes in this poem.
it's OK! We all make mistakes every once in a while. It was great writing any way!!
Thanks for telling me.Sorry.
This poem, by Judith Viorst, is one of my favorites. My fourth graders write their own version, too. I like the things you chose to write about! If I were in charge of the world I'd cancel alarm clocks and there would always be belgian waffles with strawberries for breakfast!
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