At my old school, Bellaire, there was a gang of bullies.Almost all of them were close to 5 feet tall, but the leader was about 4 feet 10 inches.Then he actually goes around stealing people's lunch money.Mostly they're gang target at us me and my friends.They all ways steal our lunch money,and my dad kept on asking were was the extra lunch money I was suppose to go back home with.It was a relief when the principal caught him in his ''bad boy'' routine, and had a talk with his parents.Luckily for the rest of the gang they didn't get caught because hid they behind the school.After Mr & Mrs.Hernandez finished they're talk with their son Micheal and the principal Micheal was grounded for five months.After that happened his mom found out he was in charge of a gang and demanded for their phone numbers she called the rest of the gang's parents, and they got grounded too.Everybody was GLAD when they heard the news.That was all everybody talked about for days,and people weren't afraid to bring their lunch money now.All the kids in Bellaire were happy now that the gang of fifth graders weren't there to ruin their fun.
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I like your story. I see some errors but i think your story is good. I think you have the potential to be a writer some day.
I think it's a great story .
Glad he got caught maybe others will learn from reading your story. Keep writing it will get easier!
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