This is "The Elmo Epic" which has entertained our class through out the school year! It is a little lengthy but the reading is well worth your time. Be prepared - it's not a story for the faint at heart!
Ohh! You could Write another story about when Elmo,he has double the strenght and then the 3 boys' Jacob, Jonathan, and well... you know the other name, break free, slice Emlo to pieces,and just like in the Percy Jackson books, the more (Things) that join his cause,he reacembles one...at...a...time! Well, thats just a thought!Just like I said a few comments ago... keep writing! And one more thing: are you going to do any more video stories like you did with Elmo?????? And I also liked the way that you told the stoy. The exspesion, hand movements, you know!
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7 comments:
HI-larious! Best Elmo story I've ever read. Keep writing!
SO COOL!! You totally won the Elmo olympics
Okay, that was downright the most weierdest stories I've ever read... in a good way! Now, where are my Stickers??????
Ohh! You could Write another story about when Elmo,he has double the strenght and then the 3 boys' Jacob, Jonathan, and well... you know the other name, break free, slice Emlo to pieces,and just like in the Percy Jackson books, the more (Things) that join his cause,he reacembles one...at...a...time! Well, thats just a thought!Just like I said a few comments ago... keep writing! And one more thing: are you going to do any more video stories like you did with Elmo?????? And I also liked the way that you told the stoy. The exspesion, hand movements, you know!
HaHa! Sooooo funny!
that was so funny. Keep it up.
You are a writting STAR!!! That was amazing. Keep it up!
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