Once upon a time there were two lovley ladies they were very very rich. All the other people on the block were very very poor.One day my mom said that were so rich we should give some of our money to the poor people.So we went door to door giving money to other people that dont have money then when ever we were done giving money to the poor people all the poor people said thankyou for giving them money.then one day all the people that we gave money to threw a surprise party and then the two lovley ladies said thankyou too and they lived happily ever after.
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4 comments:
HEHE!Love it,but there is a few mistakes.ADVICE:Check over your work when your done.It will look so much better!Great story!
Cool story! I know if I got money I'd have a smile on my face
NEEDS A LITTLE EDITING BUT IT IS STILL A GREAT STORY
I LOVE that story
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